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"Fluidic Space"
Safe inside a shifting carapace
of my own flagellant creation;
attempting to block out surroundings
pushing in with heated whispers.
"Come outside and join in with us.
One moment of relaxation won't hurt.
Just embrace our desires and cares.
Relinquish the morals you hold dear."
I know that by releasing my hold
over thoughts and words impolite
I might also enjoy their world;
but at what cost for this vagrant?
Now it would seem I am left alone,
those voices all fallen too silent.
Only now realizing how accustomed
I had become to their constant company.
By: Patrick Patin
09-20-05
2:03 PM
Safe inside a shifting carapace
of my own flagellant creation;
attempting to block out surroundings
pushing in with heated whispers.
"Come outside and join in with us.
One moment of relaxation won't hurt.
Just embrace our desires and cares.
Relinquish the morals you hold dear."
I know that by releasing my hold
over thoughts and words impolite
I might also enjoy their world;
but at what cost for this vagrant?
Now it would seem I am left alone,
those voices all fallen too silent.
Only now realizing how accustomed
I had become to their constant company.
By: Patrick Patin
09-20-05
2:03 PM
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flagellant creation?
I like everything except that one phrase.
I like everything except that one phrase.