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The Will of Victor by ~Almighty-Pipboy:iconAlmighty-Pipboy:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Urban > Fixed


"The Will of Victor"


Going against everything
That society taught him
To be considered right;
By this did he prevail.

Experiments most macabre
Unleashed God's power
From those jagged bolts
Of His inscrutable will.

Drawing from lost life
He created a simulacra
That perhaps showed
He had succeeded too well.

For though the creature
Strove to obtain innocence,
His father unwittingly begat
A child made out of sin.


By: Patrick Patin
      09-23-05
      5:35 PM
©2005-2009 ~Almighty-Pipboy
:iconalmighty-pipboy:

Author's Comments

Sometimes the drive to do something blinds us to the ethicacy of the act.


Focused more on this version of events than others:
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:icontango101ted:
~tango101ted Sep 23, 2005, 3:46:47 PM
I enjoy the concept of this very much. I also love the flow to the poem as well, and it is very concise and to the point. Very well done.
-ian
:iconalmighty-pipboy:
~Almighty-Pipboy Sep 23, 2005, 3:53:48 PM
It would seem that poetry is the only place that I am concise...

Thanks for the comment.

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"Reason is always a kind of brute force; those who appeal to the head rather than the heart, however pallid and polite, are necessarily men of violence. We speak of touching a man's heart, but we can do nothing to his head but hit it." ~G.K. Chesterton
:iconjlmoney:
~JLMoney Sep 23, 2005, 8:14:53 PM
thanks for gracing us with your iterary and prosial genius...was that a word, prosial? if so I feel smart, if not, I still feel smart for thinking of it...

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Life has an ironic way of reiterating that absolutely nothing is permanent...
:iconxarian:
~Xarian Sep 24, 2005, 3:13:57 PM
He can join you with the "word" ethicacy. :)
:iconjlmoney:
~JLMoney Sep 24, 2005, 4:48:04 PM
what?

--
Life has an ironic way of reiterating that absolutely nothing is permanent...
:iconxarian:
~Xarian Sep 25, 2005, 12:41:49 AM
Ethicacy is not a word is the point I was making.
:iconalmighty-pipboy:
~Almighty-Pipboy Sep 26, 2005, 2:18:35 PM
Prove it.

--
"Reason is always a kind of brute force; those who appeal to the head rather than the heart, however pallid and polite, are necessarily men of violence. We speak of touching a man's heart, but we can do nothing to his head but hit it." ~G.K. Chesterton
:iconalmighty-pipboy:
~Almighty-Pipboy Sep 26, 2005, 2:20:03 PM
Don't diss my verbal judo just because you can't compete.

--
"Reason is always a kind of brute force; those who appeal to the head rather than the heart, however pallid and polite, are necessarily men of violence. We speak of touching a man's heart, but we can do nothing to his head but hit it." ~G.K. Chesterton
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